Evaluation


Your life In a glass

Half filled or half empty.

Inside a voice Silently asks

Are you really thirsty?

***

Your love Wrapped in a paper

Expensive or cheap.

Do you want to love or being loved

is all that you need?

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9 thoughts on “Evaluation

      • jessicamarie19 October 24, 2011 / 6:13 pm

        Lol – it only means that I like the first stanza *more*. It’s not that the second is “less good”, I just particularly enjoyed the play on the old addage in the first one. 🙂

      • Aveek-howifeel October 24, 2011 / 6:46 pm

        Oh.Its just four lines…:)

  1. Ina October 30, 2011 / 4:51 pm

    Hi Aveek, thank you for your comment on my blog, I took a peek here and it is lovely! 🙂

    • Aveek-howifeel October 31, 2011 / 4:37 pm

      Thank you.It was a pleasure to go through your page.All the best for your book.I am sure its going to do great!

  2. claudia November 14, 2011 / 5:00 pm

    think we always want both…love and being loved..and yes..i’m really thirsty…a thought provoking write..

  3. Emma December 1, 2011 / 1:19 pm

    Interesting thoughts, I suppose it is good to step back and evalutate how we see these things. Very nice…

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